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Post by Pikafan on Nov 9, 2006 11:50:45 GMT -5
If anyone can think of a better name for it, please tell me what it is.
I'm making a Mystery dungeon Fanfic about the life of a boy turning into an eevee. He wishes he could be a pokemon one day, the next day he is.
It's kinda like MD, but a little different, I get different guys and barely any legends.
So, I'll post the Epilogue and 1st chapter later.
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Post by Pikafan on Nov 9, 2006 12:07:52 GMT -5
Since I'm bored, I'll post the epilogue now.
Epilogue:
Chris, a 12 year old boy, goes to bed one night, wishing to be a pokemon. In his sleep, he keeps tossing and turning, and in his dream he sees a weird portal that he is falling through. He keeps falling and falling, and then he lands. Then, it's morning. He wakes up, yawns, and looks around, seeing he is outside. Huh? What am I doing outside? This isn't my yard. Where am I? He looks around, and feels he is on 4 feet instead of 2. What the... why do I have furry, small, legs? Why am I standing on 4 feet? He sees a little pool of water, and runs over to it. He looks in it, then sees a shocking site! Say what? I'm a pokemon? He looks closer into the pool... I'm..... I'm an eevee?!?!?!
End of Epilogue.
Just to say, Blue is Chris.
After every chapter, I'll post what the letters are.
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Post by pharaohguy530 on Nov 9, 2006 12:11:13 GMT -5
Hey, you should fix the "Say what? I'm a pokemon?" part in the Epilogue.
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Post by Pikafan on Nov 9, 2006 12:13:59 GMT -5
Fixed, when I edited it, the mouse must have slipped.
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Post by sandragon13 on Nov 9, 2006 12:40:48 GMT -5
Pretty cool, could use a little more description, though. Let's see where you go with this. -sandragon13
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Post by Pikafan on Nov 9, 2006 12:44:21 GMT -5
I will, in chapter 1.
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Post by Pikafan on Nov 9, 2006 20:46:16 GMT -5
Here's Chapter 1.
Chapter 1: Mysterious Trapinch meets!
Chris is just staring in the pool of water, shocked that he was turned into an eevee. How am I an eevee? How did I become this way? He keeps running in circles, all freaked out. Hey, what are you doing? A strange voice came out of no where. Chris turns around and sees a pokemon walking toward him. It was a trapinch! Why are you running in circles? Well, I'm freaked out. Why? 'Cuz I'm an eevee! So? You're an ordinary pokemon. How can you say that? I'm not an eevee, I am a human! A human! How is that possible! You look just like an eevee... Chris tells trapinch what happens. Hm... That's weird. Well, anyways, I forgot to introduce myself. I'm sandragon. What's your name? Chris. Chris? That name is funny! Chris starts to drop a little sweat drop. Help! Help me! A call came out from the west. A bush started to rushle, then a Butterfree flew over to Chris and Sandragon. Please help me! Someone help! What happened? My baby caterpie fell in a fissure! A Fissure came out of nowhere when we were walking! He's not strong enough to get out! You're a butterfree, can't you get him? No, I can't! When I was trying to get him, pokemon attacked me! They seemed pretty mad, too! What? We've got to save him! "Why can't she get someone else to look for him? I need to figure out why I'm a pokemon... Oh well... I better help..." Butterfree is really worried, while Sandragon and Chris run off to look for Caterpie. They end up running to Tiny Woods to look for him...
Black: Some other non-important characters in the story. Orange: Sandragon "": This character is thinking what's in the quotes.
Chapter 2: Tiny Woods Approaches! Save Caterpie!
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Post by Pikafan on Nov 10, 2006 7:59:02 GMT -5
Chapter 2 is the final chapter I'll show before making it a fan fic.
Chapter 2: Tiny Woods Approaches! Save Caterpie!
Sandragon and Chris run to find caterpie. They end up near Tiny Woods, hearing a baby's cry. Well, this must be the place... Let's hurry up and get caterpie out. Ok. Chris and Sandragon run into the tiny woods.
First Floor
On the first floor, they see a bunch of pokemon. They walk right up to a wurmple and start to fight it. ----------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Battle time! Wurmple vs. Chris and Sandragon Chris uses tackle Tackle missed! Sandragon used Bite! Wurmple Fainted! A Pidgey walks right over from behind it! Chris uses tackle! Pidgey fainted! Chris grew to level 6! Sandragon grew to level 6! ----------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Chris and Sandragon keep walking, when Sandragon trips. He looks down, and sees 35 Poke! He picks it up and they move along. They make it to the 2nd Floor.
2nd Floor
On the second floor, they see an item. Chris walks over to it, and it's an oran berry. He picks it up and holds it. Then 3 pokemon come toward him. ----------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Battle Time! Wurmple, Pidgey, and Sunkern vs. Sandragon and Chris! Chris uses tackle on Pidgey! Tackle missed! Sandragon used Bite on Sunkern! Sunkern took 17 damage! Sunkern uses absorb on Sandragon! Sandragon took 6 damage! Sunkern recovered 3 hp! Pidgey used Tackle on Chris! Chris took 3 damage! Wurmple used tackle on sandragon! Critical hit! Sandragon took 7 damage! Sandragon's close to dying! Chris threw an oran berry at Sandragon! Sandragon ate the oran berry! Sandragon was fully healed! Thanks Chris. No Problem. Sandragon uses Bite on Sunkern! Sunkern Fainted! Wurmple uses Tackle on Chris! Tackle missed! Pidgey uses tackle on Chris! Tackle missed! Chris uses Tackle on Pidgey! Pidgey fainted! Sandragon uses bite on wurmple! Wurmple fainted! Sandragon grew to level 7! Chris grew to level 7! ----------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Sandragon and Chris keep going and find 100 Poke and 2 oran berries. They each hold 1. Then they find the stairs to floor 3.
3rd Floor
Chris and sandragon get on the 3rd floor. What? No enemies? That's easy. Hey look, the stairs. Let's go! I don't know, I have a bad feeling about this... Chris and sandragon walk into the next room, and are greeted by a monster house! 3 Sunkern, 3 Wurmple, and 2 Pidgey! See! I told you! ----------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Battle Time! Wurmple, Wurmple, Wurmple, Sunkern, Sunkern, Sunkern, Pidgey, and Pidgey vs. Chris and sandragon! Chris uses Helping hand! Chris is ready to help sandragon! Sandragon uses bite on Wurmple! Wurmple1 fainted! Wurmple2 uses tackle on Chris! Chris took 4 damage! Wurmple3, Sunkern1, Sunkern2, Sunkern3, and Pidgey1 move toward Chris and Sandragon to make a wall surrounding them. Pidgey2 stays behind it. Chris uses Tackle on pidgey1! Pidgey1 fainted! Sandragon uses Bite on Wurmple2! Wurmple2 Fainted! Sunkern1 uses Absorb on Chris! Chris took 3 damage! Sunkern1's HP remains unchanged. Sunkern2 uses absorb on Sandragon! Sandragon took 5 damage! Sunkern2's HP remains unchanged. Sunkern3 uses Absorb on Sandragon! Sandragon took 6 damage! Sunkern3's HP remains unchanged. Wurmple uses tackle on Chris! Chris took 2 damage! Pidgey2 moves next to sunkern3. Sandragon ate the oran berry. Sandragon was fully healed! Chris uses Tackle on Sunkern2! Sunkern2 fainted! Sandragon uses Bite on Sunkern1! Sunkern1 fainted! Sandragon grew to level 8! Chris grew to level 8! Chris learned Sand-Attack! Sunkern3 used Absorb on Chris! Chris took 3 damage! Sunkern's HP remains unchanged. Wurmple3 uses Tackle on Chris! Chris took 2 damage! Pidgey1 used A move tackle! Chris took no damage! Sandragon used bite on sunkern3! Sunkern fainted! Chris uses tackle on Pidgey2! Pidgey2 fainted! Wurmple3 used tackle! Sandragon took 2 damage! Sandragon used bite on Wurmple3! Wurmple3 fainted! Sandragon grew to level 9! Sandragon learned Sand-Attack! ----------------------------------------------------------------------------------- When they are about to go in the stairs, a wurmple comes over. Chris uses tackle and it faints. Chris grew to level 9! Chris and sandragon go up the stairs. Sniffel... Wah! I wanna go home! It's ok! We're here to save you! Come with us. Sniffel... ok... Caterpie, Chris, and Sandragon exit the dungeon! Walking out of tiny woods, sandragon and Chris are really tired. They have cuts all over them, and they go to look for Butterfree. They see Butterfree, and she comes flying really fast to Caterpie. Caterpie! Are you ok? Yes. Thanks to these 2! Thank you! Here, as a reward, you can have these. Butterfree handed over an Oran Berry, a Cheri Berry, and a Pecha Berry. Thanks again! Good-bye! Caterpie and Butterfree go off, to their home. Well, that was fun. Well, I'm gonna go home. See ya! Wait! Where will I go then? Oh yeah, you don't have a home. Come with me! Sandragon and Chris walk over to a little house that is a little dirty, but not that much.. You can live here! Are you sure? Yeah, this is our old rescue base! Reascue base? Yes, for pokemon rescue teams.Which Reminds me, want to start a rescure team? You were really good out there. Sure. Ok! See you tomorrow!
End of Chapter 2.
Man, that took an hour.
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Post by pharaohguy530 on Nov 10, 2006 8:02:57 GMT -5
Oh stop complaining. Its a good chapter, except the money is called, "poke" not "pkmn"
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Post by Pikafan on Nov 10, 2006 8:03:50 GMT -5
I'll fix that.
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Post by Pikafan on Nov 10, 2006 8:04:47 GMT -5
Fixed, now I'm gonna post it in the fan fic section, and every time I finish a chapter, I'll update the levels and stuff.
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