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Post by Pikafan on Nov 28, 2006 15:57:32 GMT -5
The only thing I don't understand is
It says that if you don't fail, mew will join you. You didn't fail. Did it join you?
Here's my answer to that pikafan. The test isn't over yet. The Sheimi test was one part of Mew's test. To see if I could conquer a legendary pokemon, at my level. To tell you the truth, he joins me after Poliwhirl is a Poliwrath, and Ivysaur is a Venusaur. Then, when I get to the next city, he joins my team for free.
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Post by pharaohguy530 on Nov 28, 2006 16:46:59 GMT -5
Chapter 13: Gym and Contest Challenge! Scavenger Hunt! Devon City! In direct relation with the very famous Devon Corporation of the Hoenn Region. Discovering that this patch of land had water underneath it, Mr. Stone from Hoenn built this city, to expand his company to Pharaohguy's Desert Land. Doing this, a gym was built, to make the town more famous and attractive. Billy, our hero, has followed Mew here, after catching the legendary Sheimi, and finding Sycamore. Sycamore gave our hero a lift to the city, and Mew followed him to the city. At 3 o' clock in the morning, Billy arrives, and immediatley looks for the pokemon center..... "We're lucky Sycamore is such a nice guy....Well, off to the pokemon center!" Walking for 15 minutes, Billy found the pokemon center, and went inside. Everyone in there, were tired, or sleeping. Including Nurse Joy. He decided to check on Sheimi first, before healing his pokemon. After signing in to the computer, he went to his storage system, and a special screen came up. It was like the map of the Mystery Dungeon video game. An entire region into one storage system. For the 386 pokemon of the original dex, before D/P, and a section for the Diamond and Pearl pokemon. Going to the Diamond and Pearl side, he found the place called, "Flower Elysium" and saw Sheimi eating pokesnacks. Seeing how it was happy where it was, Billy decided to talk to it. Telling it, how happy he was that it was part of the team. And that he would add it to the team, when he won the second badge and ribbon. Beedrill would be deposited, because he wanted to. Plus, Prof. Gary Oak, who owns this system, wanted to study Beedrill, since it may be female, but it is a total Tomboy. Sheimi smiled, and then waved goodbye to the other pokemon. At that time, Billy logged in to the original website, "http://pharaohguy530.proboards105.com" and wanted to check out what he could find in Devon City. He said, "It maybe old, but this site tells us everything, all pokemon and people we might see here. The site was moved to a Vbulliten site, and has become bigger than it was before. About 1,000,000 members! But serebii.net still has more members, so they are still catching up." After checking out the site, Nurse Joy woke up, and asked Billy if he needed his pokemon healed. He nodded, and then Nurse Joy took his pokemon. 5 minutes later, he got his pokemon back, all healed. Leaving the center, he walked toward the gym, and saw that it was open. The leader, must have been up early this morning.... "Well, this is the place, lets go in..." Walking in, the place looking a lot like Pewter Gym. He remembered, because his brother took him there once, to watch a gym battle. A boy about the age of 13, stepped in front of him, and said that he was a gym trainer. So Billy accepted his challenge. ------------------------------------------ Collin sent out Sandshrew! Go Ivysaur! "Use a vine whip!" Ivysaur, clearly faster and stronger than Sandshrew, took out his whips and pimp slapped sandshrew a couple of times. The super effective damage made Sandshrew fall to Ivysaur's power. Collin, frustrated by this, sent out his Eevee. "Now, use a spore!" Spores came out of that flower/bulb of his back, and made Eevee drowzy...it then fell asleep! "Use a vine whip, and then tackle!" Eevee was smacked several times with vine whip and then was tackled by Ivysaur. It stayed asleep... "Finish it, Take Down!" Ivysaur ran toward the sleeping eevee, and took it down with take down! ----------------------------------------------------- Collin smiled, and handed over $500 for the win. He then went into the back, and Nurse Joy came out...She was wearing her uniform, just without the thing on her head... Hello Billy! I bet your glad that I healed your pokemon! "Wait, Nurse Joy...your the gym leader?" "Yup! I'm the leader. I don't have just Chansey and Blissey you know...Lets start!" ----------------------------------------------------- Joy sent out Sandshrew! Go Larvitar! "Alright Larvitar, start with a rock slide!" Larvitar summoned powerful rocks, and smacked sandshrew with all of them. Sandshrew dug underground.... "Follow it, and then bite it!" Larvitar followed it underground, and they attacked each other with a series of headbutts. When Larvitar bit sandshrew, it yelped in pain, and Larvitar sent it out of the ground! "Jump out, and use dark pulse!" Larvitar glowed a dark color, and sent out a move that looked like water pulse, but a dark type move, and knocked Sandshrew right out! Joy clapped, and sent out a geodude. "Use dig!" Larvitar and Geodude both dug underground, and were looking for each other.... "Hit him with dark pulse when you see him!" They looked and looked, and when they saw each other, Geodude smacked him with a tackle! Larivtar used a dark pulse, sending waves of darkness toward geodude, hitting him hard.... "Now dig!" Larvitar grabbed Geodude and threw him up, out of the ground. Then Larvitar jumped up, and used a ground type tackle, hitting and defeating Geodude! Joy clapped again, and sent out her Onix. "Dark Pulse!" Larvitar glowed again, but so did Onix. It glowed green, and when the pulses were going to hit Onix, a shield appeared! "Great...protect...how troublesome. Use a rock slide!" Larvitar used a mystic force that made rocks slide down from the sky and hit onix hard. But onix wasn't as effected. It used a screech to greatly decrease the defense of Larvitar. "Bite!" Larvitar ran up for a bite, but was stopped by an iron tail! It did much damage, and was going to defeat Larvitar, but it wanted to win this battle badly.....So it stayed up. "Dark Pulse! Hang in there!" Onix dug underground to dodge, and then came up, hitting larvitar again! Over, and over, Larvitar was getting hit. It didn't wanna fight anymore, but it knew it had to. Suddenly, Larvitar glowed a white color, and started to transform.....it became a Pupitar! "Oh my gosh! You evolved! Alright Pupitar, congrats. Lets do this! Iron defense!" Pupitar glowed a color, and increased its defense by a lot. Onix dug underground.... "Now, jump and use dark pulse!" Onix came up, preparing a hyper beam, but the dark pulses hit onix with incredible force....and onix was on the ground.... "Body Slam it!" Onix was still holding the hyper beam, and when Pupitar used body slam on Onix's stomach, the hyper beam hit the celing, making a rock tomb, that defeated Onix for good! --------------------------------------------------------------------- Joy clapped and clapped. "You are truly a great trainer Billy. I want you to have this, the Devon Badge, the TM 15 Hyper Beam, and $3000! "Thank you so much Joy. I'll see you at the center!" Smiling after winning his challenge, he went to the center, and healed his pokemon to full health. Then, after leaving, he sent out Absol, and taught it Hyper Beam. Returning his pokemon, Beedrill and Pupitar came out to train, and that is when a familiar face appeared.....it was Kris! "Wuzzup buddy? Guess what I got?" She held up a ribbon, with the Devon City symbol on it, meaning she won the contest! "Congrats. I'm just going there now for the contest." "Well good luck, you'll need it ;D And, I've brought a friend along with me, who wants to battle you.....Good luck Billy <3 Billy kinda blushed, but he still was ready for this battle. It was Greg! He sent out a Houndoom and a Wartortile, and waited for Billy to make the first move.... ------------------------------------------------------ "Start it off! Beedrill use twinneedle on Wartortle! Pupitar, use a rock slide!" Beedrill zoomed over to wartortle, and started hitting him with the stingers that were her hands. Wartortle then escaped the pain by blasting back beedrill with water gun. Pupitar used a rock slide to smack houndoom with a rock slide, and Wartortle too. Houndoom used a howl to raise its attack. "Beedrill! Poison sting on Wartortle! Pupitar! Rock slide again!" Beedrill fired stingers at Wartortle, and 5 made a direct hit on the left arm. Poison started to spread! Wartortle then used a water gun again, and a flamethrower from Houndoom defeated Beedrill! But the rock slide ended Houndoom too.... "Its just you vs. Wartortle now! Use a rock slide!" Wartortle though, just laughed, and ran toward Pupitar, dodging all the rocks. Then, using a water pulse and a water gun, like instructed, pupitar was hit. the critical hit defeated Pupitar. ---------------------------------------------------------------------- "I lost...." "Heh. Of course you did. Smell ya later." Greg and Kris walked away....and Billy went toward the contest hall. Seeing how it said: Scavenger Hunt, Billy wondered what it would be like. Walking into the contest hall, he saw the receptionist. She smiled and asked for his contest pass. "Alright, here it is." She swipped it, and handed it back. On the computer screen came his 6 pokemon that were in his party, and Sheimi, who was in his box. She said that he was registered, and he should go into the next room. The judge smiled, and told all the people what would happen in this contest. "In this contest, you must find 1 pokemon that is on the list here, in our little safari zone. Capture it with these 20 park balls, and be the first one back here. The first 2 back, will face each other for the ribbon. You may only take one pokemon with you to battle." Billy decided that Absol would be his partner this time. Absol agreed, and then they found out that they must capture....a Grimer! Absol and Billy ran toward the toxic waste dump, to see if they could find a Grimer, but had no luck. Billy wanted to win this ribbon really badly, so he had opened his desertdex, and looked to see what Grimer liked. GRIMY FOOD So...Billy had to...take an apple and make it grimy. Ew. He took an apple, and put it in the sludge. Then, he put it down, and later, a Grimer appeared! "Absol, hyper beam!" Absol jumped up and used a hyper beam that completely shut down the grimer. Billy threw a park ball at it, and it was captured! It warped to the stage of the contest, and Billy jumped on Absol. They ran to the stage, and saw one person was there, waiting. The judge got on stage, and said that Bob must fight Billy! Its Bob's Slowking vs. Absol! --------------------------------------------- Absol started running around Slowking, as it used amensia to raise its sp. defense. Absol then pounced on Slowking, but it didn't do much damage, as Slowking had raised its Sp. Defense. Slowking was about to do a killer psychic attack, but it had no effect! Slowking had no other moves that could effect Absol, so Absol used a hyper beam in which destroyed Slowking completely! ------------------------------------------------------ The Judge said, "For getting us a grimer, and for winning this battle, you obtain the Devon Ribbon!" "Thank you Mr. Judge!" Billy had obtained his ribbon, and had left happily from the hall. A call appeared on his desertdex though...from the police... TO BE CONTINUED
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Post by Kris on Nov 28, 2006 17:33:48 GMT -5
Great chapter ;D XD to the pimp slapping Sandshrew xDDDD Aww you blushed ;D
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Post by pharaohguy530 on Nov 28, 2006 17:36:16 GMT -5
Thank you ;D The next chapter will be later today....
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Post by Mawile on Nov 28, 2006 19:07:04 GMT -5
Heh heh... I think you combined chapters 13 and 14. Whatever, that just means I'll make my appearence sooner. Heh heh, I did ;D I even said I would Mawile
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Post by pharaohguy530 on Nov 28, 2006 20:16:56 GMT -5
Chapter 14: Muk Mess! New Rival! After obtaining his newest badge and ribbon, Billy walks along the path to victory, by trying to move on to the next route. But, suddenly, his Desertdex gets a call, making his journey stop. It was a call from the police station, and that he was to go down there right away. Billy asked why, and the officer said that he would tell him when he got there. 3 minutes later, a police car came down and brought him down to the station. Walking in, the policeman had begun to tell him why he was there. He started with, "Hello Billy, I am Officer Bryan, and I'm here to ask you a favor. Recently, our water supply has become just a toxic sludge that you would see from a Pokemon. And, because of that, we are losing many people in our city. Now, Grimer do live in the sewers and water ways, but they are very well behaved. Either something happened to cause the to misbehave, or a new Pokemon started to come to the sewers and cause trouble. I would like you to go down there, and find out what is happening." Billy responded, "I guess I'll help. I don't want this city losing its fame....so drop me off there, and I'll be on my way. Suddenly, a boy about the age of 15, came in with a Quilava and a Mawile. He stopped right in front of Billy and asked the officer, "O-officer Bryan sir! My name is Nick, and these are my Pokemon, Quilava and Mawile! I would like to go down to the sewage plant and figure out what is happening, sir!" Bryan shrugged. He didn't want to send Nick, since Billy was already going....So, when he gathered up the breath to say no, Billy then said, "Hey officer, let me take him with me. I'm kinda tired anyway. Got here at 3 in the morning, and went through a gym battle, a contest challenge and a tough Pokemon battle. I could use some help." Bryan nodded and granted permission toward Nick, to go with Billy to the sewage plant! "Yay! I get to go! I promise, I'll do my best!" The two jumped into the police car, and went to the sewer. Climbing down the ladder to the sewer, we begin our quest. Walking down the path, Billy asked Nick if he has ever been in a real Pokemon battle before, and Nick said, "Yup, I battled against my Mawile. When I had a Cyndaquil, we lost all of our battles...and then a wild Mawile appeared at my doorstep. Cyndaquil battled it and evolved into Quilava, and we captured Mawile! I then realized that I was going to become a great trainer, and that I should keep going with my journey. Out of nowhere, a grimer appeared! "Well, if you are such a great trainer, prove it to me. Defeat this Grimer!" Nick nodded, and said, "Lets go Quilava, lets battle!" -------------------------------------------------- Quilava vs. Grimer! "Use an ember!" Quilava opened its mouth, and shot tiny embers from it, which grimer thought as no threat, but was hit with them and took immense damage! Grimer used a minimize, to make itself smaller..... "Now, use a quick attack!" Quilava jumped up in the air, and hit the floor, speeding up and smacking grimer hard. Grimer used a sludge, to do great damage to Quilava. "Quilava! You ok? Try and finish it with a flame wheel!" Quilava ran toward Grimer, and then started to be surrounded by flames. It tackled Grimer with immense force, and Grimer fell to the ground, fainted! --------------------------------------------------- "Alright! We did it Quilava, we defeated the Grimer!" "Your a pretty good trainer, Nick." Nick smiled, and congratulated his Quilava. As the two walked along, a roar from the end of the sewer made a terribly disturbing sound....it creeped out the Pokemon around, and Billy and Nick looked at each other. Analyzing the sound, the Desertdex said, "ANALYSIS IS COMPLETE. THE CRY IS ONE OF A MUK'S CRY." "A Muk huh? That must be what is causing the water problems...." As they went in the direction that the desertdex was pointing, Billy tripped on some sludge, and by tripping on the sludge, 2 grimer appeared! They seemed angry that a Muk was in this cave, they wanted to be the only poison Pokemon in the sewer. They took their anger out on Nick and Billy! "I'll use Absol." "And I'll use Quilava." --------------------------------------------------- "Lets go Absol, start it off with a hyper beam!" Absol used its incredible powers and gathered up energy for a hyper beam. Firing it from its mouth, one grimer was hit, and defeated with ease. The other grimer used a sludge on Absol, doing good damage. Nick commanded Quilava to use flame wheel, which hit grimer, and made him very weakened. "Nick, its all you this turn, let Absol recharge." Nick nodded, and commanded another flame wheel from Quilava. It glowed red, and then a fiery shield appeared from around him, and he ran toward grimer. Grimer didn't stand a chance, and fainted from the powerful attack. ----------------------------------------------------- "Nick, that was a good tag team. You seem to be a really good trainer." "Thanks Billy, that makes me feel great. Your awesome too..." The two kept walking along, and the roar of the Muk got louder and louder.... "Nick...why did you become a trainer?" Billy just popped this question right out of nowhere. Nick seemed surprised by this, but calmly told Billy, "I became a trainer...because I wanted to join the police force. Like my older brother, Bryan. He is my idol.....and I wanna be just like him. He told me, I had to become a trainer in order to become an officer, so I chose Cyndaquil, and now, I must become stronger. In order for my dream, to lead the police force of the desert land, to protect it from evil like Team Rocket, or Cipher, or any other evil team! "I hope you fulfill it. I'll tell you now, doing this for the city, is a great way for you to become an officer." The roar got louder, and a different roar appeared out of nowhere. It came from the water.....and when Nick and Billy looked in the water.....A wild Feraligatr jumped out! "I'll take this Nick, let me show you my true power!" ------------------------------------------------------------- "Go Jolteon! Start it off with thundershock!" Jolteon jumped out of his pokeball, and used a thundershock, which was super effective. Feraligatr screamed, and used a water gun, doing much damage. "Hang in there, use a shock wave!" A shock wave came out of Jolteon, and smacked Feraligatr hard. But it still stood up and used a bite on Jolteon, doing much damage. "Grr....use a shock wave, and then run around it and use a thundershock!" Shock wave was fired, and was dodged, but it came around and hit Jolteon! Who absorbed it and became super charged...so the thundershock's power was doubled! The power hit Feraligatr so hard, it paralyzed him! He used an ice fang, to try and get revenge, but Jolteon dodged it. "Now, another super charged thundershock!" Jolteon jumped and used another thundershock that hit Feraligatr hard....and he fell to the ground. "Now go pokeball!" The pokeball hit Feraligatr, and went "ping, pang, ping, ding!" Feraligatr was caught! It was sent to the friend area it lives in, in the PC. -------------------------------------------- Nick was amazed that such a powerful Pokemon was captured. He then said, "That...was...awesome! Lets go now! I wanna fight that Muk!" Running with Nick, they got to the end...and there it was...a Shiny Muk! It was using sludge on the water, and laughing.... "Lets go Nick, Battle time!" --------------------------------------------------- "Go Absol!" Nick sent out Quilava! Muk just laughed. "Nick, cover me! I'm charging for razor wind!" "Alright! Quilava, protect Absol!" Muk used a sludge, which quilava stopped with a flame wheel, as Absol charged for a razor wind.... "Fire away!" Absol jumped and shot the wind at Muk, which did incredible damage, and then quilava hit it with a flame wheel! A sludge bomb was fired and hit Quilava hard, and it looked like he wouldn't last much longer.... "I'll protect your Quilava, Nick! Use Hyper beam, Absol!" Absol jumped and shot a hyper beam at Muk, making it too weak to battle.... "Now, I'll catch it! Go pokeball!" The pokeball hit Muk, and absorbed it, making pinging sounds, until a ding, was heard....signaling capture! -------------------------------------------------- "Yes! We did it Nick!" "Alright! We caught Muk! Thank you for letting me catch it, Billy. I appreciate it. Lets get out of here." Nick and Billy escaped the sewer, and went back to the station. They were rewarded it with each a water stone, and honorary Police officers and heroes of the city! "Thank you Bryan. Now you have your brother on the force ;D Good luck Nick." "Thank you so much Billy, I'll never forget you!" Billy walked outside to the gate, and then took out his water stone. Sending out Poliwhirl, he said, "Poliwhirl, you are truly my first Pokemon. And it is time for you to evolve. Take this." Poliwhirl touched it, and started to change shape.....it became a Poliwrath, and learned Dynamicpunch! Just then, Nick ran down to him. "Billy, I wanted to thank you again, and challenge you to a battle!" "What, really? Heh, you'll lose though, so lets go!" ------------------------------------- Nick sent out Mawile! Go Ivysaur! "Ivysaur, use a take down!" Ivysaur ran at Mawile, and it did good, yet not very effective damage. Mawile used a vice grip, doing average damage. "Grr, use a leech seed!" Leech seed started sprouting on Mawile, and started draining energy from Mawile! IT used another vice grip. "Now, use a vine whip!" Ivysaur did a critical hit! It hit Mawile hard, and then more energy was drained....it used a fake tears, to lower Ivysaur's sp. defense.... "Finish it, spore and nature power!" Spore made Mawile fall asleep, and more energy was drained from Mawile.....and then, nature power turned into Earthquake! Mawile was hit so hard, from the super effective hit, it fainted! ------------------------------------------------ "Agh....I lost. Well, you are the best trainer I've seen, so I expected this. Good luck to you! See ya!" Thanking him for the great battle, Billy goes back to the pokemon center, and heals his team. Then he deposits Beedrill and Absol, and withdraw's Sheimi and Feraligatr. He tells Beedrill and Absol, that they should train in their friend areas, and he'll swap pokemon in the next city. They nod, and Billy is off! Toward Pokemon Stadium! TO BE CONTINUED
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Post by Mawile on Nov 28, 2006 20:26:38 GMT -5
O.O I sound somewhat like Rock Lee...
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Post by pharaohguy530 on Nov 28, 2006 20:27:47 GMT -5
lol I didn't even try to make it like that XDDDD Chapter 15 will be up tommorrow...I think
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Post by Mawile on Nov 28, 2006 20:34:50 GMT -5
Yay!! *Nice guy pose*
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Post by Kris on Nov 28, 2006 21:47:29 GMT -5
Good chapter XD, but, where you wrote "honoary", I'm pretty sure you meant "Honorary" ;D
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Post by quilavafan on Nov 28, 2006 22:06:12 GMT -5
Just started today...I'm at chapter 10.
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Post by pharaohguy530 on Nov 29, 2006 6:46:16 GMT -5
Yay Quilavafan is reading it ;D Thanks guys, and I'll change that
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Post by Pikafan on Nov 29, 2006 18:49:11 GMT -5
lol I didn't even try to make it like that XDDDD Chapter 15 will be up tommorrow...I think Wrong, you told me you made him like that.
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Post by quilavafan on Nov 29, 2006 18:58:55 GMT -5
Ok, I'm all caught up now. Its really good so far.
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Post by pharaohguy530 on Nov 29, 2006 19:48:31 GMT -5
lol I didn't even try to make it like that XDDDD Chapter 15 will be up tommorrow...I think Wrong, you told me you made him like that. No, I said, apparently I made him like that. Don't correct me pikafan. Thanks Quilavafan.
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